Thank you so much for the advice! I decided that I’ll rewrite the script using most of the tips you gave me, specifically:

Adding more personality. Giving my character a name. Writing the script in present tense (if I understood you correctly) Adding details that the viewer can’t see as opposed to what they can see

I am writing the script to entertain people, not so much for myself. I don’t have an inane desire to write, but I do have an inane desire to entertain people. I feel as though let’s plays are too done, and I need to try something new.

Do I have any writing skill, or am I more or less wasting my time here?

The name of this game is piquing my interest.

After seeing your post, I’m considering buying it!

Fuck Facebook. Fuck Meta. Fuck Zuckerberg. Fuck the oligarchs. Fuck LLMs/AI. Eat the Rich.

GIVE IT TO ME! I NEED IT. I sold a good portion of my Steam inventory in preparation!

I do this with my significant other as well.

Grandiose delusions from a ketamine-rotted brain.

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